Hi Brian, at first I liked the simplicity of this... then looked closer. So maybe you have resolved the issues I shall mention... or will resolve them if necessary.
#1: It looks like the needle is entering a metering hole that has been drilled through the wall of a circular passage. The sealing seat of the hole that the needle enters will not be a perfect circle to seal - if that is ever needed - and will it close off the fuel adequately to stop the engine - if ever required?
#2: The venturi if formed suitably by the taper of the inlet tract (bottom of the drawing). So I wonder "why?" you have what appears to be a smaller hole at the choke of the carb instead of the ore being parallel? - If you think you need a further venturi at the carb itself (Based on your experience of many small carbs - I have no experience worthy of comment!) - then I would have made a smoothly tapered inlet into this light blue cross piece, instead of a turbulent "step" from the tract diameter of the green part into the choke shown in the blue part?
#3: On the only carb I have made of this design I used a ground long tapered point from my drawing compass set (dates back to the 1960s). It worked fine without a reduction of diameter at the choke of the carb itself, but I did arrange a rotating bar with semi-circular notch to act as an air throttle, just on the "outside" of the fuel mixing point. (The engine only ran for a minute before it lost compression (cracked cylinder!), so cannot say it was a good carb design or not!).
Anyhow, I wish you success with this one!
K2